possible thesis

Thesis: Video games has become a molder of our modern society by affecting how we tell stories and teach lessons to children and adults.

The assignment is to show how video games have become a modern asset to society in various forms and whether or not it is a bad influence to children or not

http://www.computerandvideogames.com/293705/littlebigplanet-2-getting-teacher-pack-for-school-lessons/

http://metalgear.wikia.com/wiki/Metal_Gear_Solid (find specific links from there)

http://www.gameinformer.com/blogs/members/b/gamebeast23456_blog/archive/2011/02/13/video-games-benefits-to-society.aspx

Video games are a bad influence to society and to children

possible topics

1) can video games affect the way a human behaves. What are the factors that lead to the outcome?

2) can technology affect the way we make logical decisions or do we just use technologey out of conveinence?



Possible thesis: video games can affect the ways human behaves depending on what type of game and the maturity of a person.

Class feedback

I have learned a good bit on writing in this class. i have learned on how to properly create an argument within my essays. it has also helped me improve my skill sin writing conclusions. My strengths as a writer is creating a strong introduction and finding information to backing it up. i think i need to work on stating my ideas and improving the flow of my essay so that i stay on task. as a student i believe that i should get a grade of a b. my writings i put effort into it but i could do better, i state many ideas in class and actively participate. finally my homework, i am not too great on that but i can still get it done once i find time and am in the mind set. i really cant learn if I'm forced to..

self reflection on first paragraph

What I did well:
Answer the question with very details information.
Flow from sentence to sentence
Strong idea and argument
Clear understanding.

What I need to work on:
Examples
Adding more details and proof
Working on the second paragraph.

Lesson out of feedback:
I will use this information on future essays by implementing them on my first paragraph. i realize that i should actually add some in text references to see the reader's reaction.

Grade at the time: b-