What I did well:
Answer the question with very details information.
Flow from sentence to sentence
Strong idea and argument
Clear understanding.
What I need to work on:
Examples
Adding more details and proof
Working on the second paragraph.
Lesson out of feedback:
I will use this information on future essays by implementing them on my first paragraph. i realize that i should actually add some in text references to see the reader's reaction.
Grade at the time: b-
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